vanessa notes Millenium

• is gwen the same character in millenium after baggage? worth exploring? same person, different situtation?
• george, don't need to do as much; why so hyper? more seductive perhaps? why are you standing both? where are you, not clear
• have you taken something? what? 
• make the poem more romantic? so more of an anti climax
• look for the tent then, don't just say it.
• games to be played with tent? where is it? is it set up somewhere?
• gwen do you like him at all? 
• good slap! why, give it more of a moment?
• gwen do you like yiannis?
• are you waiting for a kiss from him at countdown?
• yiannis are you still high before you go?
• do you decide to stay with george because yiannis didnt kiss you and left? but then he turns you down too?