Baggage
- Blade; why are you sharing the news? what is the objective?
- might be interesting if you never look up from the paper? maybe you never want to look at mum?
- Is there some comedy to be explored with what you are actually doing to mum? We can see taht you are always changing the pillows.
- about the head - are you really arguing about who will have to look after mum?
- is that why mum coughs?
- blade - why are grapes so weird?
- blade - don't lose status so quickly when kevin comes in. maybe you can still be top dog? eating the grapes confidently adn not liking them trumps him.
- games to be played possibly with who takes the paper.
- more things for gwen to do?
- hold mum's hand?
- is gwen imagining that mum is talking to have something to do?
- more black comedy to explore with the lying down mum?
- when kevin goes, blade you can take over as top dog.
- explore the silences more?
- is gwen making up what mother says again? does she interpret gestures or coughs or do we see mum sitting up doing nothing and gwen thinks she is?
- where does more private come from? who else is there we haven't see anyone. others in scene? just other sounds? audience? sounds of other tv's?
- when radley moves to go, ackward pace; either go and they stop you or don't move like you're going.
- should Gwen really lose it when talking about how long she's been there to kevin? she has been so nicey and attentive maybe she's had enough.
- not enough of an outburst for kevin to then feel sorry
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