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Baggage

Radley – brought a positive presence to the scene, some attribute as well

R – What do you feel about Graham still living with his mum? Jealous? Annoyed?

R – Lets see more pure anger in your voice when you come back on, having a go at the NHS

Dark Matter

Alex – Try and stop blinking as much, control it. After Paiges “So you are a stalker”, then you say “yes”, realise that double meaning of the word. It’s really great that you have brought back the more stalky and un-normal element of the character. I think you character is really great; i think that it can definitely be developed more though.

Paige – When you are sitting next to Alex and he is talking AT you then, open your body up and show the audience, at the moment you are very closed off and we cannot see your whole face, let-alone body. “Right now...i really can’t be arsed, i want to go to the park”.  When say, “im a pirate”, i think you need to be more taking the piss out of him and the game and “Somalia”. You need to be more ‘weirded’ out by the fact that your boyfriend, a fully-formed adult male is asking you to play a weird game with him. I think that your first thoughts are that its going to be a crazy sex game.

Millennium

Shaun – You brought a fantastic energy to the scene, you need to work on your stamina so that you can keep it up. The “horse fucking” mini-monologue was fantastic; the pause is really brilliant in that!

Antonio – You need to have much more energy in your character, you have taken more than twice the amount of pills as Shaun’s character but yet, you are not even half as energetic.

Every Bit of my Love

Radley – The character and voice are both brilliant, just make sure that when you are speaking quickly, your diction is still clear and precise.

Yiannis and Radley  – Your energy at the beginning of the scene is really fantastic, i know its an extremely demanding peice but to pull it if you need to make sure that you are keeping the energy throughout.

Catia – You need to work on your ‘s’ sounds, work on tongue twister and diction exercises

Y – The kissing of Catias hand is really brilliant and comical

R – I like the fact that when Yiannis is talking about Laticia and ignoring you, the childishness really comes through well, i want to see more of it though, really milk it

Nicole – You have absolutely nailed your character, a really fantastic and bold choice. The times that you play the childish energy is really well done.

Nicole - do not forget to pick up the rucksack on your way to go and get changed

Catia – when you kiss radley the second time, ‘pop’ your leg

Coming Up

Shaun and Antonio – You two need to be more secure with your lines, the scene will flow much better. You need to spend time running through the scene, over and over and over it.

S – i like the fact that you are playing the anxiety to introduce Paul to your son

S – Your character has really come on a lot, your worked on maturing your character, it really shows

A – You need to work on your diction, you also need to work on making your character younger looking, younger sounding and younger acting.

Yiannis – Your character is great. Id like you to camp it up a bit more though, stereotype the campness.