Tuesday, 26 March 2013

vanessa notes 23/3



Dark Matter
  • where are you? looks like a waiting room
  • again, need for real activity?

  • WHAT IF, link to all scenes was they were all the hospital?
  • alex, a little more convincing of her, you need to seduce her into playing this game perhaps?
  • don;t laugh at me; could be a little more significant moment; subtle suggestion of another side. then back to the game.
  • paige. how are you feeling about the hammer bit?
  • what was the struggle? half joking? it needs to stay light doens't it?
  • she had the power all along? so maybe she doesn't leave at the end? 

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