Well done again, a lovely day yesterday with your two shows. Good audiences, improvements and lots of passion from the groups.
This year has been so busy, you have been like performance ninjas!
Don't wind down, keep going with presentation prep, research into industry, website building etc for unit 9.
And maybe Adur festival next.
Well done a pleasure to work with you all.
Friday, 31 May 2013
Thursday, 30 May 2013
Next Week
Hello all, just looking ahead to next week.
The next day in will be Tuesday at Ivybrook. We will critique unit 9, go through assessments and what you will need to present the following week in terms of learning, research and websites.
Please meet at 11.30 and i will be arranging individual tutorials from 10am.
On Tuesday, we also need to arrange interviews for those of you wanting to do the BA but not have the right grades in unit 8.
There is an opportunity to get involved in the Adur festival in Shoreham this year and for those of you that stay local or on the BA, great opportunities for next Adur festival too.
This will not be an assessment and is a voluntary involvement as it also falls just outside of the term with the main event on Saturday 16th June. However i would recommend it if you can as i have had exciting meetings with the new festival coordinator. She will be coming in to talk to you at 1.15.
Regarding the Living Map event at this year's festival...
The Living Map is a map of Adur created by up to 1000 human bodies, photographed and filmed from the sky.
16th June 11a.m.-12.30 Buckingham Park, Shoreham.
Performing Artists:
They would potentially be performing as:
Mother Adur
The River Nymphs
The Clans (Fishersgate, Sompting, Southwick, Lancing, Coombes, Shoreham, Kingston)
This can accommodate as many performers as there are.
These characters will bring together the different elements of the human map.
I will bring in a director/writer/devisor to work with them at the college to create the piece.
mella
Wednesday, 29 May 2013
Congratulations!
Well done all on your festival performances today. Good audiences, some good feedback and one more to go! I hope you have learnt lots and looking forward to tomorrow. Some feedback from me from today.
Also, in the red, please liaise with make up; we can probably be at space from 4.30 unless i hear different.
Peter Mayo
technical problems but the phone scene actually worked better without projection i think. Sort out music cues and how to not show computer screen.
Samantha, maybe give us more clues as to what you think about Peter when you see him up close for the first time.
I would suggest not miming the ball in squash; not in keeping with the rest of the style.
Better diction, work for even better tomorrow.
The kisses need work! you don't look like you enjoy any of them enough.
quicker blackout in ending?
In the Red
make up worked well
on my way home, i bought a money box that digitally counts money. Can we make a scene with that and Alex for the extra few minutes we need?
Scratch cards to audience? a nice dilemma maybe to have a pound or a scratch card?
how do we (should we) keep the bottle with pennies gag in?
extend paige speech to audience
work with Catia on english speech
re block price tag? can really work but squashed on stage?
Radley, worth extending your piece a little as you did yesterday? very funny responses to audiences but is there space for a little quiet moment too where this person might be more realistic and tender? To relate to an audience member maybe?
maybe just slip the people who bought something, not all?
excellent interaction with audience and improvising to react. keep it up and more.
Ending; add a scene with Alex? also would help if audience decides to keep 10 pounds. also, should alex encourage audience to contribute to decision or just one person's? it was quite a stressful ask.
Check if people at the back missed anything i sat at the front so didn't check.
to work on tomorrow
Well done all, looking forward to tomorrow. Steven, please check tickets or let me know how to in the day so i know how many to offer to first years for both shows.
Also, in the red, please liaise with make up; we can probably be at space from 4.30 unless i hear different.
Peter Mayo
technical problems but the phone scene actually worked better without projection i think. Sort out music cues and how to not show computer screen.
Samantha, maybe give us more clues as to what you think about Peter when you see him up close for the first time.
I would suggest not miming the ball in squash; not in keeping with the rest of the style.
Better diction, work for even better tomorrow.
The kisses need work! you don't look like you enjoy any of them enough.
quicker blackout in ending?
In the Red
make up worked well
on my way home, i bought a money box that digitally counts money. Can we make a scene with that and Alex for the extra few minutes we need?
Scratch cards to audience? a nice dilemma maybe to have a pound or a scratch card?
how do we (should we) keep the bottle with pennies gag in?
extend paige speech to audience
work with Catia on english speech
re block price tag? can really work but squashed on stage?
Radley, worth extending your piece a little as you did yesterday? very funny responses to audiences but is there space for a little quiet moment too where this person might be more realistic and tender? To relate to an audience member maybe?
maybe just slip the people who bought something, not all?
excellent interaction with audience and improvising to react. keep it up and more.
Ending; add a scene with Alex? also would help if audience decides to keep 10 pounds. also, should alex encourage audience to contribute to decision or just one person's? it was quite a stressful ask.
Check if people at the back missed anything i sat at the front so didn't check.
to work on tomorrow
Well done all, looking forward to tomorrow. Steven, please check tickets or let me know how to in the day so i know how many to offer to first years for both shows.
Tuesday, 28 May 2013
Friday, 24 May 2013
Flyering Tips
Flyering tips for anyone handing out flyers:
1: Never have a huge wad of flyers in your hand - never more than twenty - don't let the quantity make you look desperate
2: if someone is walking past you with their hands open, be open in word, gesture and stance; hold your hand out and GIVE AS IF YOUR LIFE DEPENDED ON IT
3: There's nothing more appealing to mediocre people than a mediocre smile; recognise mediocre people and adapt to them
4: Only two things matter on a flyer when you're outdoors; the image, and the genre; only the title if it's truly original
5: If someone is striding past you, appear to melt away, then launch yourself at them at the last minute with full vigour
6: If someone isn't giving you any eye contact, offer them the flyer with an enthusiastic gesture, but also no eye contact
7: As you lean or step towards someone as you give out a flyer, hold it upside down, turn it over only at the last moment
8 : Always make eye contact on the name of your show when talking about it to the public; only on the name of your show
9 : When you give out a flyer, as someone tries to take it, hold onto it tightly for a half a second before letting it go with a hint of reluctance, a microscopic, hardly notieceable, momentary tug of war
10: The most successful flyering is done silently, with measured eye contact and authentic smiles; if speaking, never moremore than twelve words.
1: Never have a huge wad of flyers in your hand - never more than twenty - don't let the quantity make you look desperate
2: if someone is walking past you with their hands open, be open in word, gesture and stance; hold your hand out and GIVE AS IF YOUR LIFE DEPENDED ON IT
3: There's nothing more appealing to mediocre people than a mediocre smile; recognise mediocre people and adapt to them
4: Only two things matter on a flyer when you're outdoors; the image, and the genre; only the title if it's truly original
5: If someone is striding past you, appear to melt away, then launch yourself at them at the last minute with full vigour
6: If someone isn't giving you any eye contact, offer them the flyer with an enthusiastic gesture, but also no eye contact
7: As you lean or step towards someone as you give out a flyer, hold it upside down, turn it over only at the last moment
8 : Always make eye contact on the name of your show when talking about it to the public; only on the name of your show
9 : When you give out a flyer, as someone tries to take it, hold onto it tightly for a half a second before letting it go with a hint of reluctance, a microscopic, hardly notieceable, momentary tug of war
10: The most successful flyering is done silently, with measured eye contact and authentic smiles; if speaking, never moremore than twelve words.
Tuesday, 21 May 2013
Feedback in the red 21/5
- alex very effective (random have you seen harold and maude film?)
- gwen you need to have a lot of money?
- what will writing be on? that?
- gwen great more more more
- go out neatly trio
- paige as bailiff, little more legalistic?
- radley can sing! i had forgotten.
- blade and catia where are you?
- so can george except oasis.
- sophie and nicole; weird. but good?
- subtitle catya?
- spray the baby? genious.
- ok nicole but didn't see hte lady give you anything.
- gwen volume in singing. missed most of the lyrics
- paige and nicole where are you? opportunities for some big prop/set?
- shaun to appear from nowhere?
- and nicole. should we see the singers?
- radley keep spraying hte baby?
- shall we get a crying baby?
- paige character could be developed much further
- deadpan but opportunity for some karaoke? deadpan trio but a deadpan crazy dance? tap?
- catia slow down i didn't get the text
- sophie excellent what will you really be selling?
- good george but make more of it and probably not cuba; too complex
- blade and catia choreograph the washing coudl be lovely physical sequence
- what is george doing behind washing line?
- need a really good hanging clothes prop
- paige practice vogue
- price tag; lovely voice what are we looking at?
- nicole less still; you don't need to show as much you are very engaging with much less
- good monologue but needs more i think. cigarettes are an obvious gripe could be more complex. make us think about what we buy that we can't really afford
- trio, i know you're looking at words but you need to be fearless with the songs!
- George don't play the ackwardness. we don't feel it when you play it.
- Idea; should you get the pound for the socks from the audience? see if anyone will give it?
- yes good i like the following the socks story but needs more work?
- unauthorised material? is the use of songs legal?
- still not sure audience will get dilemma; still think you need to up stakes for hte audience
- i thought gwen left the trio
Feedback peter mayo 21/5
- is there a preshow bit? what mood will you put audience in before show starts? any thoughts you want them to have?
- antonio diction much improved but more more clarity..
- where are you? can you make it clearer?
- is he annoying you from the beginning samantha? when you propose not sure you would want to from what we have seen.
- does it need to be a little more seductive and light hearted given what she wants to happen?
- lovely pauses; maybe space for a couple of longer silences layered with feeling?
- is samantha not nervous about this at all? or playing at a more relaxed experienced woman?
- antonio to audience, you really need to change where you are to go with how well you change the mood and delivery.
- relax your shoulders antonio when speaking to audience. will you address everyone?
- would be nice for you antonio to be much more relaxed with us so bigger contrast.
- missed the who cheated on his wife bit. can it be made clearer?
- where are we now?
- so far, no strong visual moments without text.
- a lot of text to follow; can you really slow down some bits and speed up others?
- where are we now? peter come back inside? using the small bar at the back?
- where are the swingers? is it us the audience?
- Fetishists pronounciation
- does yiannis have a relationship with the audience?
- nice moment of ' do you tell your wife about this?' can be a bigger moment
- idea; during antonio and yiannis speech, could samantha be on stage a glimpse into her life?
- do you need transition between live scene of the two boys and then going into phone scene?
- not sure looking at 2 guys on phone very interesting. Can you find more theatrical moments? at the moment, could this work on radio just as well?
- yiannis shouting really good break to the scene and rhythm. need more of those..
- why is wife to the left? what else can be over there?
- opportunities to play with space a little more. block more spaces into more places around the space.
- idea; what do the characters do when they cannot be seen? eg what does samantha do, what does yiannis do while on phone? this is what the theatrical can do well; juxtapose the text with something much more visual, poetic and metaphoric..
- antonio reading out messages hi... hi.... possible to be recorded by different voices?
- again when you meet, samantha you get annoyed really quickly. great to mirror images that we saw earlier but you do look too annoyed for this to go further. do you like anything about him?
- nose moment lovely but don't overplay it antonio.
- squash again across the space?
- needs to be clearer when the audience are involved adn when not. some of your scenes yiannis and antonio very much to each other.
- is the story of sex with emilia best directed to us?
- lovely scene of the bedroom
- get the synchronisation right exactly in the sense scene. How is Thursday feeling?
- careful of losing sound when looking upwards antonio
- antonio dictin deteriorating late in show.
- the twist needs more time and clarity. what is the subtext? can we see more of it? you are still all three standing like before.
- timing of kids all wrong. play with silences much more and find a more appropriate rhythm.
- why cannot yiannis' character do this? a bit out of the blue....
- smaller clues before hand that dan might fancy him?
Feedback morn 21/5
Sam – Don’t overact the beginning, its
more confusion than anger
Sam – What does Thursday think towards
Peter being so immature and childish regarding Thunderbirds? Anger?
Frustration? Entertaining?
Sam – The line is ‘I’ve got work in the morning’
A – S – The pace in the first scene is a
lot better than on previous occasion, though, we are losing all the comedy. You
need to figure out definitively where the comedy is and then make sure that the
audience hear those words, leaving pauses for laughter
Ant – Need to still work on your diction
during all monologues, don’t lose all the work that we have done.
Ant – There is a difference in looking
scared and looking constipated in your facial expressions, when Thursday is
behind you, make sure that you are not crossing that ‘line’
Ant – Make sure that you introduce yourself
to more than just 1 audience member
Ant – ‘Haddock’ make sure that your
pronounce that work correctly
Yia – when you are texting Peter, be in
a freeze, just with a cheeky smile towards the audience
Yia – When Peter is talking directly to
the audience, make sure that you are in a 100% freeze in neutral
Yia – make sure that you are in complete
control of your eyes and they do not wonder when you are talking to people,
look them in the eyes
Y – A – The change over into the phone
call scene need to be slicker, no dragging of chairs, pick them up and move
them
Yia – Don’t be afraid to go to the door
when you are shouting to your wife
Yia – Don’t strain your voice when you
are shouting to wife, there is no need to be as loud as you are currently
being. It takes a more talented actor to hold in emotion than to let it all
out, if an audience can see that you are getting angry but bottling it up they
will be able to relate to you more than looking a man shout at a wall.
Ant – When you are talking to the
audience, be more relaxed and make sure that you being nice and charming to
them
Ant – Need to make sure that you are
word perfect and confident with your lines during the msn chat conversation
scene, your diction and pronunciation are lacking
Ant – ‘i don’t smoke’ bring the pitch of
your voice down; don’t go as high as you currently do
Ant – Start your monologue while you are
taking care of Dan
Yia – Do you like that Peter is taking
care of you when the ball hits you in the face?
Ant – when you are thrusting, put your
knees on the floor. And make sure that your diction is still precise.
ALL – The first two kisses, the one
between Thursday – Dan and then Thursday – Peter were both too long, we lost
all energy
ALL – The kisses still need a lot of
work. What are your characters feeling? Where is the shock on your faces when
you are jumped on? Anger? Frustration? Enjoyment? An audience need to see the emotion
in your eyes and body language
ALL – We need to use the space more
adventurously, more spontaneously and creatively
Feedback from 20/5
Ant - Thunderbird 3 and 5 action bigger
Sam – why move your hand from his lap
Sam – are you going to sleep with me,
louder
Ant – diction in start scene needs work
Sam – what are we going to do with your
hair?
ALL – comic timing is v important, watch
stand-up comedians. Do they talk over the laughter?
Ant – straight into ‘you never
know........’ when sam exits
Yia – when come on, enter with cheeky
smile, thatll change the mood
Ant – indicate to the audience on
‘grotty pub’
Yia – BOLLOCKS, need to be bigger,
stronger
Ant – how did you find out about THIS on
gumtree
Y – A – Dialogue needs to be a little
quicker
Yia – Those jeans don’t work, let’s try
something different
Yia – need to be more clear that you are
talking to wife. Any ideas
Y – A – Look at the script for the
phonecall scene, you are missing bits
Ant- Take a pic of you with a horse
Ant – ‘Im really not gay’
Yia – Put your hands down, when Thursday
starts talking during msn chat scene
Yia – if you need to ever get changed
infront of an audience then go round the corner, you distracted from the
performance
ALL – Dont forget that your characters
are all a lot older than you are, lets make sure that is obvious to the
audience
Y – A – Make sure that when you are
playing squash, your diction and pronunciation is still good, we are losing
some of the lines because they are not clear
Ant – while saying the start of
Thunderbirds, squash monologue, give Yia a drink and make sure that his face is
alright
Ant – Second Retarded Ejaculation, needs
to be louder and clearer
Sam – Mime the words ‘its alright to
make noise’
Ant – Dont forget your phone
Yia – Dont forget the blocking for the
multi-phone call at end
Yia – Straight in with ‘maybe its for
the best’
Ant – ‘Thursday to me and Monday to
you...’ louder and more clear!!
Monday, 20 May 2013
Hi All,
I realise you are majorly busy with preparations for your Fringe shows ( good luck, can't wait to come and see you!) but I just wanted to alert you to the following workshop by Chris Chatfield, of the 1595 club. Chris has come and delivered workshops for us on Elizabethan fencing and body balance in the past and he is an excellent practitioner and tutor who works internationally - so if you are interested, it's worth booking now for this workshop and saving up your pennies!
See flyer on Blackboard. Lisa:)
Sunday, 19 May 2013
workshop on how to sell you show
hi all, i went to a workshop today about how to sell you show at the Brighton fringe and also the Edinburgh Festival. this was a great experience for me and i learnt a lot from it. these are my notes i took and there is a link at the bottom which i urge all of you to have a read.
How to do
your Media release effectively? spend a lot of time getting it
right, basically giving the publisher enough information about the show. One
page document about facts, not rubbish content that doesn't enhance what your
production is about, interesting to read, and catchy to the public eye. Listing
information about your show is key to getting the publishers and journalist to
come to your play. I.e location, time, date, who is in it etc. You should start
promoting your show early, a few months before the fringe, for example February
time, this allows you to be first in line and right in the front of the magazines
and newspaper articles, don't leave it late otherwise you will find it hard. E
mails are a great platform to sell your show to key people.
Target your
press release: don’t just go for any one because most journalists are
looking for specific shows for example dance company producing a show asks a journalist
to come and watch and review them only to find out he writes about comedy piece.
The Picture
of your production: Pictures got to stand out and easy for magazines to
use. This quote by one on the panel caught my attention “Two thing a picture
either it evokes the originality of the piece, or the concept of the piece.”
Don’t send them to journalists they will ask for it if they need it. However always
have a memory stick for insurance in case they can’t find it on the fringe
website. Trailer of your show isn't a good idea for the simple fact they don’t
have time to watch it but if you have one make sure it’s a good one. Twitter is
a good platform
Key things
that journalist’s avoid? bad word of mouth, bad reviews, any kind of marketing
gimmick, video which fell fake and doesn’t illustrate what you want to show to
an audience.
Word of mouth is quite a key factor in selling
your show. I highlighted this because it was the main talking point of the
workshop. A combination of good reviews
helps push sales up but not much. Leafleting is crucial because it is you
selling your own show and it gives straight forward dialogue to your audience. Bizarrely
taxi drivers could help promote your show if you give a free ticket??? This might
sound outrageous but they did have a point. Taxi drivers talk a lot to the
customers They talk to customers all day
long and basically they can sell the show. A weird idea but it might work.
Target the
audience that will come to your show! “You
have to exchange effective dialogue, because you need to target the audience.” The reason I highlighted Target audience is because
of the plays content. For example you wouldn’t sell your play which has full
nudity to minors they simply wouldn’t come you would aim to people more less 18
- 30. So big thing is to know what audience is right to see your show. Leaflet
design needs to be creative and stand
out from the others, if you can do yourself then do it, if not get a
designer.
What to do
after the fringe? These were questions me and others in the audience asked in the
Q&A
Getting an
award for your achievements! Getting an award can boost your shows status, as it
brings a prestige aspect to you and your performers and to the show. If you
were planning to tour it national it will certainly help Builds up an audience,
Don't upset the journalists
What quotes
are useful for the program and poster? A quote is a game at your own
risk, a quote that you put on has to be relevant to your show, no later than previous
years quotes any longer and journalist can be a put off. Never show quotes that
show the history of shows that is not related to the current show you’re
presenting. E.g. the Theatre company success, yes the company credentials are
nice to see but it doesn’t help support what you are trying to sell.
What publicist
brings to the show? They know and have experience, plus would give you
advice, has a lot of contacts, direct contact is helpful and promoting early
on. F you can't afford one there must be someone in your company which has to
take the role, and is sole responsible for your shows.
Why Edinburgh
is better than London; cheaper, more contactscand reviewers go to Edinburgh,
producers’ from all over the world come to see shows. What your show is about?
Local issues in Brighton would be worth going to Edinburgh. It’s the place to
get attention and can break through as an actor and as a company.
What advice
would you give to a student production? First of all, don't say or put
anything on a description or on a leaflet that relates to student work, its a production and should be treated
as a production, it doesn't help you sell and can down grade it. Best advice is to label it as enthusiastic, fun, a piece of new writing with new aspiring actors...etc, positive things would
be a better replacement than something which has student production on it. Do not
put it on your posters or leaflets as it sometime discredits you as a company
and the show.
I learnt a
huge amount from this experience and was worth the time. Here is a link that is
extremely helpful on how to sell your show, I urge both parties to look at it
as it has helpful tips and pointers to help us.
Fringe devised comedy research
http://books.google.co.uk/books/about/Why_Is_That_So_Funny.html?id=cIxdYFrVKiYC&redir_esc=y
Why is that so funny? A practical exploration of physical comedy. To help devising comedy.
Why is that so funny? A practical exploration of physical comedy. To help devising comedy.
Infographic
Hi Vanessa, I left an updated infographic on my previous post but thought maybe I'll do a new post so you can see it more easily.
http://bronya74.edu.glogster.com/unit-10-journey-steven-hevey-short-plays
I did complete and post by the 4pm deadline! :)
http://bronya74.edu.glogster.com/unit-10-journey-steven-hevey-short-plays
I did complete and post by the 4pm deadline! :)
Thursday, 16 May 2013
in the red feedback
george on music - more neutral would be funnier?
shaun i lost you from then you need
nicole diction missing some of texts - missed that scene completely
bit messy going on and off; a more interesting way to swap scenes?
catia little overacting...
go and see waht i can do catia, what about?
blade phonecall - more interesting way to do it? can we hear it through someone else's phone?
nicole, marigold - try different characterisation - have seen you do this before.
shaun diction - i missed that text again. these scenes interesting but need something. change midway?
sophie good selling scene - but polish accent ok?
hospital scene? messy staging. trio needs to be more truthful less sketch show like?
paige - lovely image of hanging socks? what else will they do? where do you hang them? what do they look like by the end. good pagie sustained but losing some words
i need to check facebook? too cheap a gag, not sure. is there someting even more advanced?
George did we see you put stash in sock? do we then anticipate the confusion?
gwen, who are you? careful not to mock the homeless. are you maybe someone more well off?
alex & nicole, ca we see alex?
nicole, same for child, can you make it less funny but more moving?
Have you all seen the clocktower in brighton? some link to make with it?
did alex say patients? are we the audience patients?
idea; do all audience pitch in to see how htey could make the debt together?
sorry missed the choice alex putting to us.. how do we remove the debt?
how did marigold lose snuggles?
at the moment wanting something meatier about debt. just a scene to make it more global?
promoting your shows
Hello all, some ideas for promoting your shows
email tutors and ask them to come and to tell their students
a.nisbet@nbcol.ac.uk
k.vickers@nbcol.ac.uk
ksmith@nbcol.ac.uk
h.rowlands@nbcol.ac.uk
s.leaver@nbcol.ac.uk
t.geal@nbcol.ac.uk
n.gardner@nbcol.ac.uk
m.tennant@nbcol.ac.uk
y.jones@nbcol.ac.uk
s.rees@nbcol.ac.uk
a.burns@nbcol.ac.uk
periplum@ntlworld.com
post on alumni page
post on stac page
tweet and ask for retweets
contact reviewers (please make sure you negotiate free tickets with me and nicky)
ask a ba to post on their facebook page
send me something to post on blackboard for all courses.
more ideas as they come... also, make sure each group is helping the other; if they come for one show, they might as well stay for the next?
email tutors and ask them to come and to tell their students
a.nisbet@nbcol.ac.uk
k.vickers@nbcol.ac.uk
ksmith@nbcol.ac.uk
h.rowlands@nbcol.ac.uk
s.leaver@nbcol.ac.uk
t.geal@nbcol.ac.uk
n.gardner@nbcol.ac.uk
m.tennant@nbcol.ac.uk
y.jones@nbcol.ac.uk
s.rees@nbcol.ac.uk
a.burns@nbcol.ac.uk
periplum@ntlworld.com
post on alumni page
post on stac page
tweet and ask for retweets
contact reviewers (please make sure you negotiate free tickets with me and nicky)
ask a ba to post on their facebook page
send me something to post on blackboard for all courses.
more ideas as they come... also, make sure each group is helping the other; if they come for one show, they might as well stay for the next?
Wednesday, 15 May 2013
Peter Mayo - Character Work.
Thursday's Monologue:
So, you really want to know what happened. From the
beginning? Okay, if you’re sure.
I do online dating, well did. I wouldn’t give my name or picture;
it was my way of keeping myself separate from that world. I still had my
friends and family without the complications or the questions. I met this guy
Peter on there, he seemed nice and a bit clueless, so it was an easy target to
be honest. I told him to call me Thursday Afternoon, as that’s the days I
wanted to see him. I did that with everyone, different days and never my name.
Names and details are too personal... He met me for coffee in Starbucks- well I
say coffee, I didn’t even let him grab a drink, he was already far too open
with me but in a way I liked that. I felt like there were no secrets hiding in
the cracks like other people I’d been with in the past. We talked through my
rules, the rules I have to try and make sure I don’t slip up, over step a line
or put my personal life in danger. He’s so naive and vulnerable, which meant
controlling him was easier.
The next time I met with him was in my mates flat, I didn’t tell
Peter it wasn’t mine until half an hour of being there- it didn’t make him
leave though! He was SO clueless about everything. He told me he leant about
sex from Thunderbirds-RIDICULOUS! Was kind of cute though, but he was very
annoying, I just wanted to sleep with him and it to be done. We were only there
for sex... but I ended up knowing more than I bargained for. He wasn’t bad in
the sack though- so I’ll give him that.
I broke some of my rules... I ended up calling him... and on
a Tuesday, not my usual day I know. But I had a good reason, I’d had a really
shit day at work and he actually took my mind off things. He asked me if I’d
been to a sex party- OBVIOUSLY I said no! I didn’t want him to know I went all
the time and got so out of hand. But then he told me that he, yes he- the
nervous clueless man, was having one of his own! And I actually wanted to go, I
had a rule against them now, but it was Peter, he was new to this, so thought I
should go for support, and obviously to get laid. Over the time I’d spent
sleeping with Peter, I started to warm to him, he was trustworthy and didn’t seem
to judge me, and I liked that.
So... I turn up at this party, on a Saturday night; ready
for what I thought was anything and possibly anyone... except the second voice
I hear when I enter says ‘Monday’ SHIT!! If Peter hadn’t already seen me I
would have bolted, but I had to grin and bear it. It was Dan, my sort of ex,
who unknowingly ripped my heart out three months before. He knew things about
me that Peter didn’t and that worried me. And to make matters worse it was only
the three of us, as from then the night just got weird. Peter suggested a
threesome, which yes I’ve done plenty of times before but this was different. I
wasn’t up for it, but somehow things started happening, I couldn’t control it
as well as other situations and I hated that, they though I’d just be ‘Piggy in
the middle’ NO thanks! Dan got very in my face and started talking about how I
used to behave, it got to the point where I put my identity on the line and
spilled about the lies and secret Dan’s been keeping from Peter- The secrets
that actually resulted in Dan and I ending. Dan actually got all weird and
emotional on Peter, and it wasn’t comfortable to watch. Things happened between
them, and I felt helpless and not powerful at all, Dan then left after his
confessions and it made me feel so numb, my feelings for him were gone. That
was the closure I needed and it maybe meant Pete and I could actually get
close, there could be something there. I felt for Peter, he looked so confused,
so I decided to open up to him, tell him more about me. But as soon as I
started to, he got all different on me and just wanted sex, I realised he
turned into something worse than myself, and Dan, he was us- combined. I then
thought I need to get out, I don’t want to fall for the wrong man again. But
before I left, I decided I owed it to Peter to know my name. I mean, he knew my
job and more things about me now, what was one last thing. After telling him my
name, I left to let him become who he wanted to be. I haven’t heard from him
since.
I don’t do it anymore, gave up with that life and its worked
out better for me. I’m happier.
Three Events in Thursday’s life that had an impact on the
way she is today.
-Asthma attack, dangerous. – Live life to the full
- Wanker took virginity, not how thought it would be –Fuck it, it’s obviously not meant to be special, books lied.
- Sport injury, dad said told you so. –Women can control whole life and not be told they can’t do something. Find something good at and stick it out.
- Wanker took virginity, not how thought it would be –Fuck it, it’s obviously not meant to be special, books lied.
- Sport injury, dad said told you so. –Women can control whole life and not be told they can’t do something. Find something good at and stick it out.
Key event- Dangerous
Asthma attack:
Place: Just arrived at a party.
Who with? Lea, Nic and Rob
Why?: Inhaler ran out, out of breath and shock.
Who with? Lea, Nic and Rob
Why?: Inhaler ran out, out of breath and shock.
Talking to- Friends
Speech:
I thought I was going to die! My inhaler ran out the morning
of the party and I thought nothing much of it, as I had a busy day of lessons
then I had to get ready for the party, I had no time to go and get a new one.
It didn’t even cross my mind my mind that I’d need it, and by the time of
getting ready I’d completely forgotten about it. Once Lea and I were ready we
met with Nic then walked to Robs, we were running late so I was a bit
flustered, they told me to take it easy but I said I’d be fine. We finally got
there and I was a bit out of breath, started to remember I hadn’t got my
inhaler, so decided once we get in the house I’d try and rest and calm down.
But as soon as we got in, I saw my ex Will with his new girl and it shocked me,
more than I wanted it to, I suddenly got really short of breath, Nic tried to
calm me but nothing was working. Lea moved people out of the way but I was
really struggling to breath, it felt like someone was standing on my chest, it
was like I was drowning. I heard people shouting and it all started to go
blurry. I couldn’t do anything without my inhaler. I thought I was dying. I passed out.
I woke up in hospital, I felt exhausted, drained and worried. Lea said they called my mum and that she was on her way. I was just relieved I was actually alive. As for Will he can go to hell, I would have been fine if he hadn’t been there.
I woke up in hospital, I felt exhausted, drained and worried. Lea said they called my mum and that she was on her way. I was just relieved I was actually alive. As for Will he can go to hell, I would have been fine if he hadn’t been there.
Anyway, I’m okay now and that’s the main thing! I have an
inhaler on me all the time now and I decided I should live life to the full! I
need to take chances, work hard and do something fun and out there! I don’t want
this to hold me back, so I’m going to take control. I’m still going to run with
my inhaler, I’m so grateful I’m alive. I’m never going to be this stupid again.
I’m going to be totally in control of my life.
Samantha
Tuesday, 14 May 2013
Character development writing task
13th of may
2013
Anton
checkov monologue exercise
I don't
know what to feel, he just so friendly and lovely i can't seem to get him out
of my mind. He isn't like most most guys i have ever been with, but it is
suppose to mean nothing, i told him that but what are these feelings happening
how can i not feel nothing, nothing but pure love for him. So how do i stop
thinking about him. I could just stop texting him, just go never see him again
change my phone everything, but he will always be in my mind. I never thought
i'd get this personal, what is wrong with me, i mean i only met him a few
months ago. Sure he was quite attractive but i never would think i would
actually love him. Not now... Now i know what Monday felt with me.He must feel
the same way, he must. I mean how can it not be, we laugh, his lists of
interest match mine, we play squash, i mean if he didn't come to munchies and
not want to get involved why would he be here. he is just like me... Yeah, just
like me. I helped him no one else, i showed him all these things maybe he will
finally open up to me. Tonight's the night I'm just gonna say it, peter i have
feelings for you. But still what if he thinks differently it not like he is
just gonna open up and fling his cock out at me. Then again we did organised a
sex party together anything can happen.
Next
exercise three life changing points in your characters life.
Ø getting
married, his first and only love at the time
Ø having his
child the happiest thing ever to happen
Ø wife is to
tired from work not enough sex, goes on internet to find NSA fun
Experience
The date on
which this happened, were where you told about this, who were you with at the
time this happen, quick explaination about why (optional), last thing who you
are saying this speech too.
can remember like it was yesterday, it was
25th of march 2007 and i was in my car driving to do an emergency plumbing at
some grumby old house which looked like the whole thing would come down. Tell
you the old women bored the hell about her grand kids growing up and telling
her to go to old folks home. Luckly i was with my mate josh who was with me one
this job. Once we finally got her to away from us my wife suddenly starts
calling me. Now here me thinking what does this women want again, can't she
tell im working. Miss call her but she
keeps ringing so i got the picked up the phone and said what do you want love?
To my surprise it wasn't her but her mom. Telling me to come to Chelsea hospital
your wife is having the baby. I tell ya it was like i was hit but a bus, i
could feel anything but joy. I raced to the van leaving josh to finish the job,
and i sped through the busy traffic to get there. I don't really now how i
felt, just so many things were racing through at once, but as i got closer i
started to feel this nervous chill coming up my spine. Then you feel this
doubt, what if im ready, can i really be a good father, what if he doesn't like
me. All these questions start arising but as you get closer these questions
start to fade away as the eagerness to see you own so being born. It took my wife carol 6 hours to
give birth but as i came into the hospital room i saw him, and i felt this warm
glow, a bubbling feeling which i guess all fathers feel when they see their child
for the first time. Just pure joy and a moment of peace that now you start your
life as a proper family. Just me, my child and my wifes mother, i have never
been so happy after that. So what i say to you micheal is if you really want to
have this baby it will make such a great change in your life that nothing can
compare to it.
Addresses
Hello all, the people listed below, please email D.geal@nbcol.ac.uk with your correct addresses. this is important for the details and qualification to be sent to you and you need to confirm right address.
Yiannis
george
radley
Blade
sophie
samantha
thanks
Yiannis
george
radley
Blade
sophie
samantha
thanks
Monday, 13 May 2013
Rehearsals as it stands
At the moment the rehearsals, are going well. one thing i was afraid of at the start of this project was that rehearsals would be unproductive and meaningless but so far they have been organised and are helping develop our piece. each rehearsal is different and creative, for example. Steven got us to do team building exercise just outside the college. which was a great experience, also our character profiles were made this week which i found i could visually see what my character looks like to a whole biography of his life, this has reflected in my performances and i can feel the development growing. some of the exercises we a bit hard for me to get involved for example when Steven got us to lay down and visualize our character in our minds i tend to drift off, which didn't help my development.
One thing Steven has done effectively is his execution with his ideas, he brings it out in a way we all understand however he does lack at times to give us his reasons why he wants us to do it. i also feel that some of Steven's exercises currently focus a lot on the visual aspects and i would like to try more exercises which can help create my characters physicality as i feel i lack it.
with the lines we have been working hard and i personally am off script thanks to the rest of the group, we motivate each other to keep up and make sure we are all on the same page. for example Antonio who has the biggest task of all to learn the main role, he has being no stop trying to get off script, with our encouragement he has succeed. what i think lacks the most is the physical aspects and the blocking, due to the fact we were not totally off script in recent weeks we haven't blocked properly. at times i feel in some scenes i don't know what i should be doing. however we have so far blocked a good foundation in this play.
Overall we are on plan at the moment with were where at i couldn't see how we could of done any better. we all are very committed and passionate and it reflects in our rehearsals.
One thing Steven has done effectively is his execution with his ideas, he brings it out in a way we all understand however he does lack at times to give us his reasons why he wants us to do it. i also feel that some of Steven's exercises currently focus a lot on the visual aspects and i would like to try more exercises which can help create my characters physicality as i feel i lack it.
with the lines we have been working hard and i personally am off script thanks to the rest of the group, we motivate each other to keep up and make sure we are all on the same page. for example Antonio who has the biggest task of all to learn the main role, he has being no stop trying to get off script, with our encouragement he has succeed. what i think lacks the most is the physical aspects and the blocking, due to the fact we were not totally off script in recent weeks we haven't blocked properly. at times i feel in some scenes i don't know what i should be doing. however we have so far blocked a good foundation in this play.
Overall we are on plan at the moment with were where at i couldn't see how we could of done any better. we all are very committed and passionate and it reflects in our rehearsals.
Sunday, 12 May 2013
Unit 10 Infographic
Hi Vanessa,
I've done my infographic, it's quite basic with words because I put all my words in the self assessment so its mainly visual. I hope it works, it won't work properly with me. Its very interactive so please press buttons and scroll down text pieces.
Please will tell me how I can improve although I can't fit any more on there!
Here's the link I think, (it doesn't seem to be loading):
http://bronya74.edu.glogster.com/unit-10-journey-steven-hevey-short-plays
I've done my infographic, it's quite basic with words because I put all my words in the self assessment so its mainly visual. I hope it works, it won't work properly with me. Its very interactive so please press buttons and scroll down text pieces.
Please will tell me how I can improve although I can't fit any more on there!
Here's the link I think, (it doesn't seem to be loading):
If it doesn't load, here is a picture of it for now:
Thanks, Blade
Friday, 10 May 2013
Peter Mayo Rehearsals!!
Well, I am very pleased to say our rehearsals for Peter Mayo, I feel, are going really well! I really look forward to coming in everyday, and enjoy doing a proper warm up to get us focused and ready for the day, which we all take turns in leading.
We have blocked every scene, obviously still needing work on them, but its great to have the initial blocking down so we can work on characters and developing the piece around it. We did a great afternoon the other day where we worked souly on our character work. We did an imagination exercise that helped us to visually create our character in our minds, then as we laid down with eyes closed, started to describe feelings our characters had, in certain times in the play. We have all also been working on our character profiles at home while in this rehearsal process, this is really helped me to develop my character and understand her even more than I did before by creating her whole life, from what her birthday is, to her favourite drink and her bedtime. This had helped me into creating her day, and understand more when the scenes take place in her life, what she was doing before and what she will be doing after. I love doing this for a character and trying to get to know them as well as I can in the space of time I have. I feel we've really bonded as a group, although we were close friends anyway, but the trust in the rehearsal room is highly important, and I feel there is a very high level of trust and respect between us. We did a team and trust building exercise the other day, which involved woods (college woodland), blindfolds, and being lead around and getting in touch with your senses!
All three of us are off script which is now really helping in the rehearsal room, as we don't have it in our hands, it's helping blocking, movement and character development take place. There are still moments of all us actors feeling unsure of some lines, but I feel this is disappear over this week to come, as we've done the play many times through now, it's becoming muscle memory, so it will come naturally. Steve's direction and vision has been clear and his people skills and how to handle unsure situations or tough scenes has really improved, you can really see his development from unit 10, and how much he's learnt from it.
We've been now promoting to show with encouragement from Steve to not only our families but branching out and finding our audience, which is highly important as we have a venue to fill! It's great doing this, as I'm learning how to pitch the show, what to talk about and how to get them interested. Our posters are starting to get out and about so we're hoping to see a ticket rise very soon.
But really loving this process so far, and can't wait to continue!
Samantha :)
We have blocked every scene, obviously still needing work on them, but its great to have the initial blocking down so we can work on characters and developing the piece around it. We did a great afternoon the other day where we worked souly on our character work. We did an imagination exercise that helped us to visually create our character in our minds, then as we laid down with eyes closed, started to describe feelings our characters had, in certain times in the play. We have all also been working on our character profiles at home while in this rehearsal process, this is really helped me to develop my character and understand her even more than I did before by creating her whole life, from what her birthday is, to her favourite drink and her bedtime. This had helped me into creating her day, and understand more when the scenes take place in her life, what she was doing before and what she will be doing after. I love doing this for a character and trying to get to know them as well as I can in the space of time I have. I feel we've really bonded as a group, although we were close friends anyway, but the trust in the rehearsal room is highly important, and I feel there is a very high level of trust and respect between us. We did a team and trust building exercise the other day, which involved woods (college woodland), blindfolds, and being lead around and getting in touch with your senses!
All three of us are off script which is now really helping in the rehearsal room, as we don't have it in our hands, it's helping blocking, movement and character development take place. There are still moments of all us actors feeling unsure of some lines, but I feel this is disappear over this week to come, as we've done the play many times through now, it's becoming muscle memory, so it will come naturally. Steve's direction and vision has been clear and his people skills and how to handle unsure situations or tough scenes has really improved, you can really see his development from unit 10, and how much he's learnt from it.
We've been now promoting to show with encouragement from Steve to not only our families but branching out and finding our audience, which is highly important as we have a venue to fill! It's great doing this, as I'm learning how to pitch the show, what to talk about and how to get them interested. Our posters are starting to get out and about so we're hoping to see a ticket rise very soon.
But really loving this process so far, and can't wait to continue!
Samantha :)
Theatre rating and obscenities!
Hi Vanessa,
Please can you tell me where to find theatre show rating procedures? I found the advert for 'In The Red' and it said PG rating. There are rules and guidelines which we must adhere to but don't know where to find them. I did some internet research and found info but wasn't sure if they were genuine.
thanks, Blade!
Please can you tell me where to find theatre show rating procedures? I found the advert for 'In The Red' and it said PG rating. There are rules and guidelines which we must adhere to but don't know where to find them. I did some internet research and found info but wasn't sure if they were genuine.
thanks, Blade!
Thursday, 9 May 2013
Devised Group.
This week has gone well in terms of progression, passion and co-operation! I feel we are powering on and learning from our past experiences. I am looking folward to the next few weeks and am genuinely excited for the fringe!
Sophie.
Sophie.
Fringe Devised
Today was a very positive day, we have a structure that feels solid to develop more. I was impressed by the fact that every one of our group has contributed something strong to our piece. There have been conflicting ideas and a difference of opinion with the direction wanted however differing opinions generate inventive ideas. Everyone has different strengths which have come together quite nicely in my opinion and today with some reassurance and guidance from Clare and Polly, spice was added to bring out the flavour in us!
Sincerely Blade
Sincerely Blade
Deadline
Hello all, a reminder that tomorrow by 4pm is the deadline for reviews, infographic and self assessment.
Please email me final submissions by 4pm
thanks
Tuesday, 7 May 2013
Fringe - Devised
This is not my joke:
"Sir, there`s a debt collector in the outer office."
"Tell him he can take that pile on my desk"
"Sir, there`s a debt collector in the outer office."
"Tell him he can take that pile on my desk"
Infographics
Some inventive, thoughtful and interesting infographics coming in for feedback.
Just some reminders before the deadline. Make sure that the images you are using support your analysis. What does the image say about your experience? if it is a visualisation of data, how do you interpret and analyse that data? what does it teach you about collaboration? Also, as a piece of work it needs to reference and use further research. What do others say about collaboration that informs this, what theories underpin your practice and analysis, what sources are you using beyond your own experience. I would also encourage you to share your infographics on the blog to inspire and help each other.
Thanks
Vanessa
Just some reminders before the deadline. Make sure that the images you are using support your analysis. What does the image say about your experience? if it is a visualisation of data, how do you interpret and analyse that data? what does it teach you about collaboration? Also, as a piece of work it needs to reference and use further research. What do others say about collaboration that informs this, what theories underpin your practice and analysis, what sources are you using beyond your own experience. I would also encourage you to share your infographics on the blog to inspire and help each other.
Thanks
Vanessa
Wednesday, 1 May 2013
more infographic examples
Consider; what did your collaboration look like? how does it compare with the processes of other companies? what research is informing your conceptualisation of your own process? How do you evaluate it?
Collaboration
Notes on collaboration to spark ideas.
Collaboration!
Schirle, J. (2005). Potholes in the Road to
Devising. Theatre Topics, 15, 91-102.
Every artistic process involves difficulty and
risk, and devising has its own set of challenges. The playwright faces the
problem of the blank page; with group devising, the problem is compounded by
the number of opinions about how to fill it. Whether a particular collaborative
process is based on harmony or on enthusiastic contention, there is no
guarantee that the best ideas will emerge when the smoke has cleared or that
the simultaneous contributions of numbers of people can unite in a work of
power and vision.
Page 91
When collaborations are attempted, there is a
greater chance of success if the group establishes and adheres to basic
guidelines for working together. Collaborative
principles encourage artists to develop trust and respect, come to a common
understanding of the challenge, and to be clear about intention, roles, and
agendas. By creating a shared space, generating and manipulating models, and
using outside resources and strategies, the capacity for making decisions is
expanded.
Page 91
Oddey, A. (1994). Devising Theatre: a practical and theoretical handbook, London,
Routledge.
Devising begins with the interaction between the
members of a group and starting point or stimulus chosen. The group absorbs the source material,
responds to it, and then generates a method of working to the initial aims of
the company and project. The devising
process challenges every group member to confront the work, engage with it
individually at different levels, as well as developing a sense of group
cooperation, affiliation and unity at the same time. All groups are different as personalities
change the group dynamics and impetus of the work. Working in unison becomes difficult when
individuals conflict with each other, but is also an intrinsic part of
establishing a collective group identity.
Ultimately, it is about the group discovering a relationship between itself
and the product it produces.
Page 24
Heddon, D. & Milling, J. (2006). Devising Performance: a critical history,
London, Palgrave MacMillan.
It is our argument that collaborative devising
processes match contemporary critical concerns, making it the ideal means to
explore and embody those concerns in practice.
Page 192
Etchells, T. (1999). Certain Fragments: contemporary performance and Forced Entertainment,
London, Routledge.
Or is collaboration this: a kind of complex game
of consequences or Chinese whispers - a good way of confounding
intentions? If the process of direction
in the theatre most usually has at its heart the interpretation of a text and
the fixing of a set of meanings in it, the staging of one interpretation of
many possible ones - perhaps we had in mind something utterly different - of
theatre or performances as a space in which different visions, different
sensibilities, different intentions could collide.
Page 55
... gaps are the most important thing because
it's there where you stop 'showing' and the audience can use their imaginative
powers and they're the ones that fill the gap.
That's where they become true collaborators. And if you can invent the gap well enough the
audience just comes right into there.
Page 93
Graham, S. & Hoggett, S. (2009). The Frantic Assembly Book of Devising
Theatre, London, Routledge.
Our favourite devising processes are the ones
where the lines of creativity start to blur.
A successful production for us will be one where it is hard to
distinguish which came first between, say, words and movement and music. This is achieved in a rehearsal room where
the creative team act as one unit, sitting in front of the same scene or image
or moment and all feeding into the process not just as, say, lighting designer
but as potential audience member and a Frantic theatre maker.
Page 8
Sometimes good ideas come quickly. Some days you find yourself skipping home
from rehearsal thinking you have cracked it.
You have found the elixir. You know
this is how the should be done. This
kind of conviction can be fantastic but it can also cloud your judgement. There have been times when we have absolutely
thought that we have found the only way to do a scene or stumbled upon the most
brilliant physical scene that encapsulates and lifts the whole production. Invariably our passions become dimmed. The love affair is over and we see clearly
now. The scene is not going to work.
Page 41
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