every bit of my love
- yiannis are you parodying the character? then all the acting could be of same style. if not, really mean it that this is art.
- maybe it is a parody to the audience of how good actors you are.
- in that case, radley's ' maybe it is' (your moment ) is another try to pull focus and show audience he is better actor?
- is this a fly on the wall documentary?
- is the acting as big when rehearsing the scenes? some contrast needed perhaps. maybe you are good actors when acting in the film? or the other way round? some sharp change would be interesting and layer the piece.
- meeting between ian and tracy; give it longer if it's such a big shock
- tracy how do you feel about seeing him there? did you know he was there? is this planned to force a decision from him?
- i think it's a bluff by tracy and she never meant to go through with it?
- again when yiannis on the phone, chance to change the acting and suggest another layer to reality.
- Radley what moment made you give it all up? what image put you off the whole thing ? play it a little more.
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