well done good start. if you could it would be lovely to have the roller coaster stages more precisely compared to particular stages in the collaboration. quote is relevant but try and use further academic sources to inform your ideas. pick apart what you say further to make the analysis more in depth. for example, look at other actors' rehearsal diaries (one example here http://www.royalexchange.co.uk/uploads/education/MISS%20JULIE%20Rehearsal%20Diary%20by%20Anna%20Marsland.pdf) or accounts of collaboration by other companies. how do they compare with yours? Don't analyse everything; maybe focus on some particular points. when was the coaster scariest, or when did it go up... What in particular have you learnt about collaboration? also look at my earlier post with reading sources. A lot of feedback here i know...
Thanks for the feedback Vanessa. I tried to open the link and it says 'The page cannot be found' but i will look into their page and see if i can find anything. I like having lots off feedback because them i know how i'm doing and what can i do to make it better, so don't worry :)
well done good start. if you could it would be lovely to have the roller coaster stages more precisely compared to particular stages in the collaboration. quote is relevant but try and use further academic sources to inform your ideas. pick apart what you say further to make the analysis more in depth. for example, look at other actors' rehearsal diaries (one example here http://www.royalexchange.co.uk/uploads/education/MISS%20JULIE%20Rehearsal%20Diary%20by%20Anna%20Marsland.pdf) or accounts of collaboration by other companies. how do they compare with yours? Don't analyse everything; maybe focus on some particular points. when was the coaster scariest, or when did it go up... What in particular have you learnt about collaboration? also look at my earlier post with reading sources. A lot of feedback here i know...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback Vanessa. I tried to open the link and it says 'The page cannot be found' but i will look into their page and see if i can find anything. I like having lots off feedback because them i know how i'm doing and what can i do to make it better, so don't worry :)
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