Feedback from 20/5

Ant - Thunderbird 3 and 5 action bigger

Sam – why move your hand from his lap

Sam – are you going to sleep with me, louder

Ant – diction in start scene needs work

Sam – what are we going to do with your hair?

ALL – comic timing is v important, watch stand-up comedians. Do they talk over the laughter?

Ant – straight into ‘you never know........’ when sam exits

Yia – when come on, enter with cheeky smile, thatll change the mood

Ant – indicate to the audience on ‘grotty pub’

Yia – BOLLOCKS, need to be bigger, stronger

Ant – how did you find out about THIS on gumtree

Y – A – Dialogue needs to be a little quicker

Yia – Those jeans don’t work, let’s try something different

Yia – need to be more clear that you are talking to wife. Any ideas

Y – A – Look at the script for the phonecall scene, you are missing bits

Ant- Take a pic of you with a horse

Ant – ‘Im really not gay’

Yia – Put your hands down, when Thursday starts talking during msn chat scene

Yia – if you need to ever get changed infront of an audience then go round the corner, you distracted from the performance

ALL – Dont forget that your characters are all a lot older than you are, lets make sure that is obvious to the audience

Y – A – Make sure that when you are playing squash, your diction and pronunciation is still good, we are losing some of the lines because they are not clear

Ant – while saying the start of Thunderbirds, squash monologue, give Yia a drink and make sure that his face is alright

Ant – Second Retarded Ejaculation, needs to be louder and clearer

Sam – Mime the words ‘its alright to make noise’

Ant – Dont forget your phone

Yia – Dont forget the blocking for the multi-phone call at end

Yia – Straight in with ‘maybe its for the best’

Ant – ‘Thursday to me and Monday to you...’ louder and more clear!!