Congratulations!

Well done all on your festival performances today. Good audiences, some good feedback and one more to go! I hope you have learnt lots and looking forward to tomorrow. Some feedback from me from today.
Also, in the red, please liaise with make up; we can probably be at space from 4.30 unless i hear different.

Peter Mayo

technical problems but the phone scene actually worked better without projection i think. Sort out music cues and how to not show computer screen.
Samantha, maybe give us more clues as to what you think about Peter when you see him up close for the first time.
I would suggest not miming the ball in squash; not in keeping with the rest of the style.
Better diction, work for even better tomorrow.
The kisses need work! you don't look like you enjoy any of them enough.
quicker blackout in ending?


In the Red

make up worked well
on my way home, i bought a money box that digitally counts money. Can we make a scene with that and Alex for the extra few minutes we need?
Scratch cards to audience? a nice dilemma maybe to have a pound or a scratch card?
how do we (should we) keep the bottle with pennies gag in?
extend paige speech to audience
work with Catia on english speech
re block price tag? can really work but squashed on stage?
Radley, worth extending your piece a little as you did yesterday? very funny responses to audiences but is there space for a little quiet moment too where this person might be more realistic and tender? To relate to an audience member maybe?
maybe just slip the people who bought something, not all?
excellent interaction with audience and improvising to react. keep it up and more.
Ending; add a scene with Alex? also would help if audience decides to keep 10 pounds. also, should alex encourage audience to contribute to decision or just one person's? it was quite a stressful ask.
Check if people at the back missed anything i sat at the front so didn't check.
to work on tomorrow

Well done all, looking forward to tomorrow. Steven, please check tickets or let me know how to in the day so i know how many to offer to first years for both shows.