Feedback in the red 21/5

• alex very effective (random have you seen harold and maude film?)
• gwen you need to have a lot of money?
• what will writing be on? that?
• gwen great more more more
• go out neatly trio
• paige as bailiff, little more legalistic?
• radley can sing! i had forgotten.
• blade and catia where are you?
• so can george except oasis.
• sophie and nicole; weird. but good?
• subtitle catya?
• spray the baby? genious.
• ok nicole but didn't see hte lady give you anything.
• gwen volume in singing. missed most of the lyrics
• paige and nicole where are you? opportunities for some big prop/set?
• shaun to appear from nowhere?
• and nicole. should we see the singers?
• radley keep spraying hte baby?
• shall we get a crying baby?
• paige character could be developed much further
• deadpan but opportunity for some karaoke? deadpan trio but a deadpan crazy dance? tap?
• catia slow down i didn't get the text
• sophie excellent what will you really be selling?
• good george but make more of it and probably not cuba; too complex
• blade and catia choreograph the washing coudl be lovely physical sequence
• what is george doing behind washing line?
• need a really good hanging clothes prop
• paige practice vogue
• price tag; lovely voice what are we looking at?
• nicole less still; you don't need to show as much you are very engaging with much less
• good monologue but needs more i think. cigarettes are an obvious gripe could be more complex. make us think about what we buy that we can't really afford
• trio, i know you're looking at words but you need to be fearless with the songs!
• George don't play the ackwardness. we don't feel it when you play it.
• Idea; should you get the pound for the socks from the audience? see if anyone will give it?
• yes good i like the following the socks story but needs more work?
• unauthorised material? is the use of songs legal?
• still not sure audience will get dilemma; still think you need to up stakes for hte audience
• i thought gwen left the trio
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