Blade keep looking at sandwich earlier?
Alex, try blinking less?
Paige I don't understand less harsh?
Very dark
George hug to Gwendoline not sure what relationship is
George why so confused about the tent? Or shocked that he has taken something?
George don't mock the song
Antonio diction!
Antonio why did you come in the room?
Gwendoline who do you fancy?
Need to make more of the tent
What happened in the tent to get something on your face? Did you kiss one of them?
Radner good setting up unsure from the beginning
Quite a bit shocks you about the script Radley. Why?
Noisy high heels don't walk and talk
Radley I'm a man, is this another speech? Another role? It comes too easily.
Is kissing fake cos that is what you're used to? Or should it be more tender?
Steve gently with the actors!
Shaun better much subtler
Are you looking towards other room for yuan is?
You can tell me I'm your father. Mean it, change pace and mood to tender and sincere?
Antonio, keep your dressing gown on seemed very insincere
Phone didn't ring!
Your names not Paul get right inflection
Can see you hiding behind sofa
Why standing all the time? Seems unnatural
Last explanation to Antonio, again find the honesty and tender really try to get through to him
PizZa sorry? It's not a weird thing he is saying
Last I know is funny
Cinderella music takes away the poignancy I would really consider losing it.
Sophie and Sam, yesterday subtle and understated. Beware of emoting. Best when subtler
Sophie last speech too emotive
Don't you sophie
emphasis much more effective yesterday, less tender
What is Pinocchio line?
Steve gentler with directing actors!
apologies Gwen for the repeated Gwendoline, wasn't telling you off, predictive typing! But i do quite like it, shall we keep it?
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