some excellent delivery. however at this very early stage the delivery seems a little outwards like you are more interested in the language than each other. As if you are not interacting physically which i know you wont be for radio, but need to cheat it. Hope that makes sense. Exciting project.
Yeah, I agree with Vanessa and Dan, perhaps more reaction to what you're saying to each other. This will contribute to my full understanding of the words too I think. However, the background noise was extremely effective in my opinion, combined with the tones of both of your voices, it sounds somewhat like you were carrying out surveillance on someone in a shopping mall!
some excellent delivery. however at this very early stage the delivery seems a little outwards like you are more interested in the language than each other. As if you are not interacting physically which i know you wont be for radio, but need to cheat it. Hope that makes sense. Exciting project.
ReplyDeleteI agree, you are waiting for each other to speak rather than reacting to one another. Good first bash though.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I agree with Vanessa and Dan, perhaps more reaction to what you're saying to each other. This will contribute to my full understanding of the words too I think. However, the background noise was extremely effective in my opinion, combined with the tones of both of your voices, it sounds somewhat like you were carrying out surveillance on someone in a shopping mall!
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